Gonzales and Donovan didn't stay to eat dinner but started toward town as
soon as they had concluded their deals for the day. Melinda gave them
disapproving looks, but she took what was left of the money and ration books
and promised to give them to Amalia when she returned from her errands. "I
hope you don't plan to be out late," Melinda said, glaring more at Donovan
than Gonzales, who she considered a hopeless case.
"I'm just tagging along to see more of the town and have a real beer,
if I can find one. I'll be back early."
Once they got to the main drag, Gonzales hailed a bicycle rickshaw and they
were treated to a swift, bouncy ride down the dusty street, then through a few
increasingly dismal side streets until they found themselves in a suburban slum of ramshackle huts, abandoned cars and broken mobile homes. Not
even weeds seemed willing to grow in this barren moonscape where the
hard-packed earth was scarcely distinguishable from the surrounding rock.
Scraggly chickens and a few lean mutts poked among the trash at the margins of
rusting fences. Dirty children ran up to the rickshaw with their hands out,
clamoring for coins. A few sullen men sat in the doorways of their shacks,
drinking uncertain homebrews out of old bottles and staring vacantly as the
rickshaw clattered past. From inside one of the hovels, a baby shrieked.
After a few more bends in the road, Donovan saw a sprawling concrete block
of a building, silhouetted against the darkening sky. It had been designed to
mimic native adobe but was now just a cheap architectural abandonment. The
exterior glittered with sickly pink lights hung on long strings draped over the
walls and around two big windows facing what was left of an asphalt parking
lot. Bicycles, horses and a wagon were tied to posts in front and there were a
few electric and coal diesel scooters as well. All of these were guarded by two
big men with shotguns who strode back and forth casting distinctly suspicious looks on
anyone who tried to approach a mode of transport without showing a chit to the
greasy-haired teenager who was keeping tabs. As their rickshaw pulled into the
driveway, they could hear the crash of frenetic music, vaguely Tejano
with a native drumbeat and something else going on that Donovan couldn't place.
"So what do you think?" Gonzales asked as he tipped the driver.
Donovan looked around, excited to find himself in a place where something was
happening, no matter how irrational, after so long in the country. He stepped around a young man who even
at this early hour was on his knees puking into a patch of yellow weeds.
"I think this will work."
They pushed their way through the knot of men hovering around the doorway
and entered a large open space that in spite of the promise of the lights at
the windows, was dimly lit and of questionable cleanliness. To their right
stretched a long bar backed by shelves of bottles of all description, although
Donovan knew from experience that most of the bottles probably contained the
same thing--local rotgut being passed off as imported liquor.
Scattered around the bar were a few tables where men played cards or engaged
in animated discussions with each other and whores, most of whom seemed to be
local Hispanic and Indian girls with dusky skin, dark curls, bloody lipstick
and brightly colored dresses. On the other side of the room were several pool
tables, their felt surfaces in varying states of patching and repair. This area
was more brightly lit than the bar and was full of men and garishly painted
women tossing back drinks and taking shots at the colored balls, laughing or
cursing as the balls ran up against the seams in the poorly repaired felt.
Toward the back was the doorway to the dance hall and Donovan could see
people moving around to the chaotic thumping of the music. A rangy redhead
stalked out of the room and looked around, sullenly sizing up the crowd.
Underneath her heavy makeup, her skin was waxy, tinged with blue around her
eyes, collarbone, and the slender joints of her wrists, as if she were bruised.
The dim light reflected off the spangles of her dress, only partially
disguising its poor cut and drooping hem. She walked over to the bar, found a
spot near the bartender's well and said a few words. The bartender, a short
dark man with a hook nose, nodded and poured her a double shot.
Clutching her drink, she leaned against a blank spot on the wall, surveying
the room from the rim of her glass as she sucked down the harsh brown liquor.
Three men, made bold by the local moonshine, approached her, drawn by her
unusual coloring and the flame of her waist-length hair, even though her face
was too angular, her manner too desultory to be attractive.
Gonzales noticed Donovan wasn't following him to the bar and stopped to see
what he was looking at. "She's a strange one," he said. "I
noticed her here last night."
"Did you get anywhere with her?" Donovan asked, pretending to turn
his interest to his drink options.
"I didn't even try." Gonzales put a foot up on the brass rail and
motioned the bartender over. "Bourbon," he said. "House is fine.
And whatever he wants." He made a motion with his head to indicate
Donovan.
"How about some scotch.”
"You got it." The bartender took a couple more orders and began
racking up glassware.
"The scotch is probably the same as the bourbon," Gonzales pointed
out. "All of it likely distilled last week from some local farmer's
cornfield."
"Yeah, but you got to ask, you know. You never know when you might get
lucky." Without intending to, Donovan found his gaze wandering back to the
redhead, who was still talking to the men, forcing a smile and sucking on her
whiskey with determination.
The look wasn't lost on Gonzales. "If getting lucky is what you're
after, I wouldn't bother with her."
"Is she not what I think she is?"
Their drinks arrived and Gonzales tossed the bartender a silver coin.
"Oh, she's a whore, all right," he said, taking a gulp of his
home-distilled bourbon and grimacing. "And if you like them with an
attitude, I guess she's the one for you. But me, I can't do it if they don't
seem to want it. I mean, I know none of them do this for kicks, but if they
can't at least pretend they like me a little. . ."
"I hear you," Donovan said. "I’m not really interested in
her. Just curious. She doesn't fit in."
"I know that's right." Gonzales looked around the room. "But
hey, it's too early to be thinking about the girls. They'll be here all night
and we ain't even got started yet." He spotted what he was looking for and
gave Donovan a grin. "I see there's a game going on over there," he
pointed. "You up for some poker?"
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just two guys out on the town. I love the interaction even in times like these they act the same
ReplyDeleteI think a little less of Donovan that he could be lured in by a whore, though I can understand the curiosity factor.
ReplyDeleteHmm! This took me back 50 years or more. Luckily my eyes were more active than the rest of me and I behaved myself but I did a lot of observing and avoided a few fights apart from other men falling on top of me! Let's hope the gut rot doesn't make him make the wrong choices. Are you going to tell us a bit more of his history so we can judge him better?
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